Don't jump off of that bridge; I never said I was perfect with grammar. I'm not an English major.

Come on, your fics at least have Bill IN CHARACTER. :] That's all I ask for in a fic... they can have the characters do strange things as long as they do that strange thing in their usual manner. I don't care if Bill summoned pink ponies--he has to summon them while acting like himself. That's my main complaint about the fic... Bill's threatening to rape Laura, he's acting all stalkerish, and he treats her like property. It's disgusting and unacceptable in my book.